As this is just a first draft any criticism regarding shots and things to add or take out are welcome. There are some sound effects missing and a soundtrack which I'm still searching for. I'm looking for something jazzy to go with the Vegas theme.
Encouraging to see this - and in general terms it reads clearly! I suggest you move quickly towards maya pre-viz, because it would be good to see you getting the very most out of those dynamic camera angles and really showing how all of the 'action' scenes are going to work.
The one thing I would say is I'm still not getting sense of the 'scale/scope' of limbo - i.e. that establishing shot of the casino as we track around it - everything still feels too 'in the same room' - I'd like to see you introduce some bigger/wider establishing shots of the place as a space.
But yes - in terms of making good progress - I'd consider creating a hybrid animatic, where you use Maya pre-vis to communicate the more complex action scenes.
Hey Alex,
ReplyDeleteEncouraging to see this - and in general terms it reads clearly! I suggest you move quickly towards maya pre-viz, because it would be good to see you getting the very most out of those dynamic camera angles and really showing how all of the 'action' scenes are going to work.
The one thing I would say is I'm still not getting sense of the 'scale/scope' of limbo - i.e. that establishing shot of the casino as we track around it - everything still feels too 'in the same room' - I'd like to see you introduce some bigger/wider establishing shots of the place as a space.
But yes - in terms of making good progress - I'd consider creating a hybrid animatic, where you use Maya pre-vis to communicate the more complex action scenes.
Good stuff, Alex - onwards!